Last week, I wrote a play! Here it is! When you have a chance please give it a read and let me know what you think. I’m pretty pleased with it, so I hope you enjoy it.
[Update: The first version of this play won OLT's 69th National One Act Playwriting competition. The play has been reworked a couple of times since then, and the link is to the latest version.]
Home in Time: A Play In One Act
All thoughts, comments, etc. are very welcome.
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Posted in: Plays
nadinethornhill
November 2, 2009
This? Is pure fabulousness!
sterlinglynch
November 2, 2009
Fantastic! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it.
Lady Buttons
November 2, 2009
Love it! I laughed out loud at the broom poking. A few typos and grammar bits here and there — do you want feedback on those? Otherwise, agreed, unadulterated fabilisness!
sterlinglynch
November 2, 2009
Thanks for taking the time to read it LB. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Yes, please, I will take advantage of your fresh eyes. Perhaps you could drop me an email with the bits I should look at: sterling.lynch@gmail.com
Muchly appreciated!
Lady Rose
November 2, 2009
I liked it. Still philosophizing but a bit frothier than your other works. Maybe frothy isn’t the right word, but something like lighter. You should submit it to these folks: http://www.lunchboxtheatre.com/stage-one.html
sterlinglynch
November 3, 2009
Thanks for reading and I am glad you like it. Thanks for the lead.
Wayne C.
November 17, 2009
Yep. It’s good. I like the message.
sterlinglynch
November 17, 2009
Thanks for reading! I’m glad you like it.
Chantale
November 18, 2009
Ok just got around to reading it. It’s very good. I enjoyed it. I might edit a few in the last Mary/Martha scene and beginning where there are some areas that repeat., but really very engaging story – intriguing. Good job Mr. Lynch Yup I have to say fun, intelligent. Great job.
sterlinglynch
November 18, 2009
Thanks Chantale — for reading and your comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I have made more than a few edits and I’m embarrassed to admit I haven’t put the revised version up yet. Sorry.
Hopefully, I’ve addressed some of your concerns in those edits.
Chantale
November 19, 2009
I think it’s very good!!! I was telling Tim he should read it!
sterlinglynch
November 19, 2009
Thanks. Tell him to comment as well. I’m a comment junkie!